Second Piece Of Copy Ever! · 4D Copywriting Community

Second Piece Of Copy Ever!

Hey guys it would be super helpful if anyone can review my copy. My first was terrible but hopefully this one is better. I have two emails they are both about the same subject but written differently. I need help on which one is better and where the email can improve. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1QSOD1rGpa-lV1cQrlsYNzNuSa0Ntfx2o3jgq_uzUJ4c/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks.

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