Hey (NAME),
I was browsing your website, and I have to say, I really like what you’re doing! I’m currently building my copywriting portfolio, and I noticed a few places where stronger copy could really help you connect with potential clients.If you want to know more you can reply me. Btw I will rewrite the part for completely free if you want.
No pressure at all !
Guys I outreached first person and visited his website, his headline wasnt good enough.I am offering him free value in first message not selling him. From this 1st client i can have proof that this made him more sales. He has 2k followers in IG.