May 25 (edited) • 💬 General
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Guys this fitness influencer has 68k followers and landing page headline and starting part is bad as hell.I am offering him/her free value first and if they say yes II will send free value and after 1-2 weeks I will ask how it is going and at least take testimonial even if I dont get to work.And this isnt any outreach template I burned brain calories.
1 week before I replied to their story: You are developing serious strength with these workouts. How much hours do you train?
PROSPECT's SYSTEM OR BOT: sent link of a guide after I commented one keyword in their comment.
I:Thanks(they reacted heart emoji)
I FOLLOW UP: Hey NAME, I saw your landing page selling your programs and found some parts where you can enhance it. Let me know if you are interested in seeing my suggestions.
AGAIN FOLLOW UP TODAY: If you aren't interested to see the suggestion that I can provide you for COMPLETELY FREE then you can simply reply with "NO". I don't want to waste anyone's time and I will never message you again. Also, after making those changes in your page it can increase sales of your paid course.
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