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Landing page review

Long story short I made this landing page with ai designed for affiliate marketing (hero ai funnels) that was part of the course (hero AI) I got for 1497 before I lost my job in March of 2023 and dealt with the hours getting cut in 2024 about 5 months before the time I did the copy writing challenge (30 days to paid). After the challenge was over mid to late November 2024,I was thinking about using copy writing to start SMMA and the “helpful” comment on the link I posted asking for advice on how to use it as an offer (building landing pages as a service for someone else) in a school group was “your landing page needs work”(looking back I realize asking for feedback from people that don’t know/ fully understand copywriting was a mistake). The product that the landing page is for is called Livpure. I haven’t tried to edit since about 2023 when I made it since I was so focused on learning(not practicing) copywriting. Would copying links like these into a Google doc be helpful moving forward? Let me know for sure, any advice would be greatly appreciated:

Landing page variation 1: https://healthierlifestylesolutions.com/exotichack/

Landing page variation 2:

https://healthierlifestylesolutions.com/exotic-hack-2/

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