Apr '24 • 💬 General
i ve just finished my first copy
please help me analyse it / critic it give advice and please don t hold back thank u in advance
CHANGE YOUR LIFE IN 90 DAYS
HI SHAWN
Tell me if this is you
You are just relaxing at home scrolling on tiktok
And you come across a video on it u see a that new lambo you ve been dreaming of driving
As the video progresses you catch a glimpse of the driver
It’s a 16 year old kid with barely a follicle of hair in his chin
Then you think how did this kid get to drive this super car
U see him flexing
throwing 100 and 100 of of 100 dollar bills
A thought comes to mind , maybe his one of those spoilt rich kids
But u keep inverstigating further And u find out that this is not the case
U stumbled on a video where he tells u about his back story
He tells u that he bought a particular course worth thousands and thousands of dollars
He followed every instruction to a T
Now his living his best life
This hits your pride a little
If this boy can make it surely I can to
So u empty ur savings account and buy the course
Where u find out that the information is vague, the mentors just give u the theory instead of practically showing u how its done
Next thing u know the month ends and u have achieved nothing
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i ve just finished my first copy
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