Hello guys I just finished my 22nd ever written practice copy. I used CJN template with some minor changes. In this email, I gave off some free value to keep a releationship with potential customer, but also offer my product. (I would send this if I had previous releationship with them) If you could review it and tell me what I did wrong or good, and rate it from 1-10 it would mean a world to me. Thanks in advance!