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The Case for "Tell, Don't Show"
We're drilled to "show, don't tell." But sometimes telling is exactly what your scene needs. When to tell instead of show: - When the event is too traumatic or graphic to depict the character recounting it often carries more emotional weight than the visual ever could - When the backstory is complex but the present moment is urgent a few lines of exposition keeps the story moving - When the telling itself reveals character how someone describes an event shows who they are, what they remember, what they omit - When restraint creates mystery letting the audience imagine the horror often lands harder than showing it Think of the opening of Jaws. We don't see the shark attack. We hear about it. The telling builds dread the showing would have diminished. Every conventional rule in screenwriting has a time when it needs to be bent or broken. "Show, don't tell" is a guideline, not a law. The question is always: what serves the story and the audience in this specific moment? Do you have a scene that tells instead of shows? Drop it below. If not, try incorporating this in your next scene or script and see what happens.
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General Question
I've been struggling to write dialogues for my characters. I want to be able to write fine dialogue. When I say fine dialogue, I am reminded of the opening of Pulp Fiction, where the the couple is just sitting in the diner and there is nothing but dialogue but it's still so interesting to watch. What's the key to writing fine dialogue?
Pitch Practice
In two lines or less tell us about your latest project. Dont give us the entire story. Remember the goal is to entice us. Make us want to ask follow-up questions.
AIs you should know (and some you should avoid)
ChatGPT: Will always agree on what you say and doesn’t notice flaws. Is creative however. Claude: Can be smart - but only with the right prompt and on Max effort level Copilot: Just don’t. Grok: You want to support Elon Musk? Perplexity: Top research tool on the market! Gemini: Smart, but sells whatever you input. So change up your ideas before inputting them. Did I forget any? Open for discussions on all these.
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The Scariest Ideas Live on the Fringes of the Internet
A YouTube short of a yellow-tinted office purgatory. No monsters. No gore. Just empty hallways, humming fluorescents, and the creeping sense that something is fundamentally wrong. That single video became "The Backrooms" now an A24 feature starring Chiwetel Ejiofor. The idea came from a 2019 4chan thread asking users to post "disquieting images that just feel off." The internet's fringes are breeding grounds for collective fear. The Backrooms wasn't one person's vision it was built by anonymous voices adding fragments of lore, rules, and existential dread. The horror came from collaborative unease, not a single author. Liminal spaces are inherently terrifying.Empty malls at closing time. Office hallways with no exit. Stairwells that lead nowhere. These are places built for function, not story and that absence becomes the story. Withholding explanation is the point. The Backrooms works because it resists over-explanation. No mythology bible. No franchise-ready villain. Just spatial hostility, repetition, and the fear that you've slipped into a reality that refuses to let you leave. YouTube shorts can scale to features without losing their soul if you understand what made the original terrifying. Long takes past comfort, sound design as narrative beats, abrupt spatial shifts that feel like reality glitching. Here's the question: What unsettling corner of the internet have you seen that could become your next horror concept? A Reddit thread? A forgotten forum? A piece of lost media? The scariest stories aren't always in the canon. Sometimes they're one click away from the mainstream, waiting for someone to recognize what makes them work. Drop what you've found below. Let's see what's lurking out there.
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