After and befor editing (LR) dont no if i doing IT good or not.

hello guys, I'm a begginer and need more advice on editing or how to take a good pict. btw I took this last year when I was visited Bali, Indonesia.

this is a pic i took when i visited New York during Christmas a few years back. i dont do much architecture photography so if anyone is more experienced id love some feedback!

hey all! i'm hoping to make this a really inviting and educational space for photographers of all skill levels. if you are new, post a little introduction and a picture you've taken recently! if you want any advice on how to edit/take better pictures, just ask. i'll be looking for those posts and giving critiques/advice, and i encourage you to do the same. let's make this an awesome community for photographers!