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Offer Review and Feedback

Whats up community. Asking all the wonderful folks in here to provide brutally honest feedback to help me improve my offer/headline.

Quick background, I'm a basketball performance and skills coach. I am going to sell a low ticket ebook "From Doubt to Dominance: The Hoopers Ultimate Guide to Building Unshakeable Confidence and Mental Toughness". Confidence is a pain point that is brought up alot by parents and players.

I'm using this low ticket guide to book calls for in person and online coaching.

OFFER/HEADLINE

Secure these "5 Little Unknown" ways to empower hoopers to improve confidence & mental toughness, in as little as 30 days

2. Elite Basketball Trainer Reveals the simple 5 step process Hoopers need to build unshakeable confidence and Mamba Mental toughness in less than 30 days.

Thanks in advance for your feedback

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