Is this a good offer? · Max Business School™

Is this a good offer?

I'm an agency owner from India and I serve indian clients but looking to scale internationally now. I was going to start outreaching but before that, I wanted to make my offer better. I watched some Alex Hormozi videos on how to create your offer and finally I've built one. Can you guys rate it out of 10 and also give me some tips on how can I reach people to sell it.

We will help you produce 30 high-quality short form videos and 4 long-form videos every month (Topic selection, script hooks, video editing, distribution)

Also, we will create 3 extra pages to repurpose your content and get some extra attention.

We will upload your videos to instagram, tiktok and youtube.

On top of that, we guarantee at least 1 million views in the first 30 days and if we don't achieve that, we refund double your money.

I've added the guarantee because it's really easy for us to get more than a million views views through short-form content, as that's what we specialize in and we've done that multiple times in the past.

I would like to hear everyone's opinion on my offer.

And one more thing, we're not good at outreaching, as we've never done it in the past. We have mostly indian clients right now who don't pay much and we get them by referrals, my indian personal brand and some personal connections. So if someone who is good at outreaching wants to help or maybe partner up then I'm open to it, you can directly DM me or leave a comment.

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