Most offers are too long or too vague. Drop your offer in one sentence below. Example format: “I help [who] go from [pain] to [result] without [thing they hate].” I’ll help you: Remove fluff Increase clarity Make it easier for Founders/Sales Leaders to “get it”

Drop your most recent LinkedIn post below. If it: Got likes but no leads Felt “fine” but didn’t spark conversations Didn’t sound as sharp as you wanted I’ll rewrite: The hook The opening angle The CTA (if needed) When you post, include: Target reader: Founder / Sales Leader Goal: comments, DMs, or calls Let’s sharpen it.