Which day per week is best for group and private video calls? Other days, I’ll post tips and tools as often as they seem relevant.

- Send in your 20 pages this weekend if you can. - Post your questions about the submission here so we get to see what we’re figuring out together. It helps us all. - Help each other and answer those posts. - Sunday we have a welcome group chat on Zoom. A bit of a Q&A. - Next week I’ll email you my suggestions and answers re your work.

I mostly just want to work one on one. I have those 500 pages and have been revising quite a bit, starting at the beginning and could send you a couple of chapters soon.

When you have a section, a paragraph you're not sure of, read it out loud. Record yourself. Come back later that afternoon and then listen. How does it flow? How does it sound to you? This is a great tip from @Kimberly Davis who suggested it in the other group. Try it. I find it one of those easy to do things that helps more than expected. It shows me when something feels clunky, or the sentences all have the same rhythm. (A problem with AI 'writing' is its pace and rhythm.) Anyway, I'm curious to see if you do this too. and yes, my dogs love me reading to them in the mornings...