I took the first version and spent some time polishing it instead of generating a brand new video.
I improved the opening hook, pacing, transitions, caption timing, added more movement to the website, and cleaned up the ending. I also used text overlays to show more of what I do without making the voiceover longer.
I'm treating this as an ongoing learning project, so I'd really appreciate honest feedback.
If this were your video, what would you improve next?
And what should I experiment with in the next version?