Roast My New Landing Page
I've been chatting with a few folks here.
Most of them said my agency Debrand.me's landing page is confusing.
So to resonate more with my targeted audience,
I did some copy refinement, driving more clarity, (I used Cluade and Notion)
My current target is:
  • A founder developing a B2B MVP
  • A CMO looking to strengthen their product design system
  • Scaleups expanding their engineering staff and seeking a system for design-to-engineer communication.
There are some materials I couldn't share due to NDA.
So I put them in an extended Notion web page 👉 here.
What I'm looking for is:
  • What do you think about the structure?
  • Are the plans reasonable or cost-efficient?
  • If there's anything I could do to enhance it more?
  • Any section you felt uncomfortable with?
Thanks to anyone who would help.
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Mahmoud Debsawi
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Roast My New Landing Page
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