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It's my first time posting in here. I've been a member for months now and am just getting around to watching the videos and interacting. Anyway, here's my blurb for my dark fantasy story, book one. "Conspiracies. Betrayals. Murder. Daughter of the Monarch, young Flynae desires the traditional, peaceful life of her elf-like people. One fateful morning, her world is shattered by the most unlikely of culprits, a mere human. With the single swing of a sword, her existence degrades into an abyss of abuse and misery. A strange, unknown voice in her head provides her only solace. In a cruel twist, fate inextricably links the young girl to her father's murderer. Unable to exist apart from him for even fleeting moments of privacy, Flynae grapples with the guilt of Trusting the Enemy. How will this young Princess break free from her sadistic tormentors to realize her destiny? Trusting the Enemy, the first book in The Monarch’s Daughter series, is a sci-fi-fueled, epic fantasy following an emerging heroine with an unexpected and forbidden love interest.