a RANDOM copy i wrote today, just want your critique guys
Headline: "Suffering is rent. You’re already paying.” Body: You keep saying you did this, you tried that, you hustled, you worked. That’s the real problem. The ones who make it don’t talk about what they did But about what they became. They won’t blame people, timing, or luck. They shoulder it like it’s personal, because it is. Every winner I’ve met knows that one simple fact: NO ONE IS COMING They create their own chances. stopped waiting for luck and started building doors. Knowing luck only finds the prepared, because life doesn’t reward the hopeful. But sadly, most never sign the lease. They keep complaining it isn’t fair You want fair? Wake before dawn, carry pressure that breaks most, endure pain others avoid, and life will hand you an unfair advantage. Suffering isn’t punishment, it’s rent. Every payment makes you better. The voice whispering “It shouldn’t be this hard” is the same one chasing cheap dopamine. Your brain’s built for safety, not the hard work. Rewire it. Stop scrolling. Silence the noise. Put in the reps for discipline, not dopamine. Kill the weak version of yourself piece by piece. Build the version of you that doesn’t wait for luck. Each rep defies the old habits. Each choice fades your old self. And in that moment, The entrepreneur inside you isn’t born from luck. He arises from your hard work. P.S. The lease is waiting, are you staying safe? (CTA) Sign Here… and start paying rent to your future self