Ive been working on this for weeks now and I feel like its getting worse hah. Can anyone give me some insight on why that might be or whats wrong with it??

This is just the skeleton of what I am working on. I am fairly limited with only ableton lite and 8 tracks. But I am at a point where I need to transiotion the vibe and change the momentum oif the track. That is the next step. Feedback more than welcome. I have used some recorded samples of maxwell maltz so it likely has copyright issues so it is for my learning only not for use.

Hey yall! Let me know what you think of this.. its a remix and a basic loop but this is what im going to be working off for the remainder of the month. Any tips or feedback is greatly appreciated!

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