I'd love to get some feedback on the first version of my VSL. Fire away! 🔥 https://www.skool.com/standout-stylist

I've been working with Maiia for around 2 months now and let me tell you, it was the BEST decision I've made. She's been writing CRAZY good copy and we've been seeing good results come around! I'm not joking when I say that reading her copy made me want to buy from myself... Thank you @Maiia Zlotnikova 🙏

Here's the 1st draft of my VSL script, would love to get feedback on the copy and ways to improve this for my community: https://www.skool.com/standout-stylist/about Goal: Refine the script, and then record the 1st version ASAP. Script (1st Draft): Hairstylists, do you ever feel like you’re putting so much effort into Instagram, but it’s NOT helping your business grow? You’re posting, showing off your work, and trying to stay consistent, but your page feels stuck. Meanwhile, other stylists are using Instagram to attract dream clients, go viral, and build their brands, and you’re left asking yourself, 'What am I missing?' I’ve worked with so many talented hairstylists who felt exactly the same way. They were ambitious and they had the talent, but Instagram JUST wasn’t translating into the results they wanted. After years of studying Instagram and testing different strategies, I discovered one simple truth: it’s not about working harder and spending MORE hours on the platform; it’s actually about working smarter and creating content that’s easy to make and stay consistent with. And when you focus on what actually works, EVERYTHING CHANGES. Now, I want to share with you the exact strategies I’ve used to help hairstylists grow their Instagram pages, connect with other professionals, and finally turn their effort into real results. These aren’t complicated tactics or hacks that only work temporarily. These are proven systems designed to save you time, boost your engagement, and help you build a stronger, more connected business online. Here’s what some stylists are already saying: Amber shared, 'I’ve been engaging with lots of different pages, and the results have been amazing! My audience has grown over 100 followers in just a week, and I’ve gotten new downloads of my book without even pitching it to anyone.' Leah said, 'Standout Stylist has been a game changer! From sharing experiences to asking for help, I’ve found a community of stylists who care for their craft and want to maximize their business potential. The tools Ryan provides have helped me take my social media to the next level.'

I wasn't feeling my about page copy as much this week and wanted to rework it some so it sounded more human. While the previous version was good, it felt a little too robotic/pitchy. The new version is 989 characters. What do you think? 😁

🎉 Maiia Zlotnikova and Skool Ads Copybook are the REAL DEAL! She helped me update my copy on my Skool About Page and I can't even believe it myself, but within 12 hours I had 2 more members join at $24 monthly! 🔥🔥