Hey @Nabeel Azeez sir and everyone, I’m currently in talks with a potential client for my first project of this scope and would love some pricing feedback. The work would include: - 2 customer journeys - Lead magnet > nurture > offer sequences - Email + SMS copy - 3-Day Intensive campaign - Segmentation - Initial optimization/testing - Ongoing value, objection and sales email strategy - 4-5 emails/ week I’m thinking $1.5K–$2K for the initial 30-day build. Does that pricing sound reasonable for the scope or would you price it differently?

Got a DM around a month ago asking me to set up email flows for this ecom brand. Convinced them to give up on the cute Figma designs and start sending text-based emails to their list. Month One: 415% increase in email revenue compared to the previous month.

Hey everyone! I'd love some honest feedback on this homepage copy rewrite I did for GetResponse. Target audience: Small business owners, solopreneurs, creators, coaches, and marketers who want an easy-to-use email marketing platform without a steep learning curve. Goal: Improve clarity, make the benefits more compelling, and increase sign-ups for the 30-day free trial while keeping the copy concise. I'm especially looking for feedback on: - Does the headline grab attention? - Are the benefits stronger than the original? - Is anything unclear, unbelievable, or too generic? - Which sections would you rewrite differently and why? Thanks in advance! Orginial World’s Easiest Email Marketing 350,000 happy customers in 182 countries, engaging more than 1 billion subscribers every month. Email Creator Now anyone can create beautiful emails that look great on any device. See how it works in less than two minutes. Autoresponders Turn leads into customers with smarter automated follow-up. Landing Pages Create, publish and host beautiful, high‑converting landing pages - in minutes. 24/7 Live Support Our friendly & helpful experts are standing by 24/7 to help you with anything you need. 99% Email Deliverability Get better delivery rates, fewer bounces and stronger results. CTA: Try Get Response - FREE For 30 Days No credit card required. My version: Email Marketing so Easy, a monkey can do it Trusted by 350,000 businesses across 182 countries to reach more than 1 billion subscribers every month. See how it works in less than two minutes. [VSL] - Create beautiful emails that give a PERFECT view on every device - Turn leads into customers with a smarter, automated follow-up system - Create and publish a high-converting landing page in less than 60 seconds.  - Stuck at 2 AM? Our support experts are available 24/7 whenever you need help  - Reach more inboxes with 99% email deliverability and fewer bounced emails. 

Hey everyone 👋 I practiced writing an email for a real estate coaching business and would really appreciate your feedback. Target audience: Beginner real estate investors who are skeptical of high-ticket coaching because they've seen negative reviews or been disappointed by theory-heavy programs. The goal is to get them to join a free community before introducing the paid coaching offer. I'd especially love feedback on: - Does the hook make you want to keep reading? - Are there any logical gaps or points where trust drops? - Does the offer feel clear and believable? - Where does the copy lose your attention? - @Nabeel Azeez , if you get a chance, I'd especially appreciate your thoughts since I'm actively working on improving my email copy. Thanks in advance! Email: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KbVz5k9i-ogjj5Z0UKcOpIzIjrzfJvJBTkIRyXFye5o/edit?tab=t.0

Copy translation of AD 1: Hathaway's Aertex Club: Slightly NEW for people who haven’ heard about this earlier, builds curiosity and indicates branding a damnably smart leisure shirt: Conveying useful as it’s saying the shirt is stylish, sharp, and attractive casual garment for relaxing or informal wear with 987,693 tiny windows to keep you cool: Attention to the numbers, specific and tiny windows…is a mechanism (Here this ad is shifting the belief that one no longer has to choose between looking elegant and staying cool as Hathaway gives them both ) The elegance is the work of Hathaway's nimble-fingered cutters: attention to detail, home town value You can detect several of their cunning touches in the Club shirt above.: quality ensure and shows thoughtfulness in design because one wouldn't notice unless someone pointed them out Other blessings: flat, strong seams. Well-nigh indestructible buttons. And a pair of virtuously long shirt tails that won't slither out of your trousers.: Ease, comfort, quality control English Aertex: Origin "Invented by an English doctor. : Indicates authority so it’s SAFE Overall, this ad is conveying that with a Hathaway shirt you will stay cool without sacrificing style and elegance AD 2: The Gun is a $2,000 Purdey from England The gun here only plays the role of catching users' attention like the eyepatch, while establishing an identity of wealth, taste, and refinement….further it totally disconnects from the shirt (The shirt: A Sylex® Sea Island Cotton from Hathaway): After connecting it with the image, Ogilvy establishes here the luxury possession in this ad the structure it goes from origin > journey > benefits The Sylex Sea Island yarn is spun with loving care by Thomas Oliver & Sons, then woven on the looms of Ashton Brothers—two of the finest mills in England. Notice the extraordinary sheen. You can almost feel its downy softness. : it’s creating a sense of imagined touch in readers mind The shirts are superbly tailored, with all the Hathaway hallmarks—long tails, single-needle stitching, big ocean pearl buttons. Price: $15.95 in colors and white;