@Tara-Nicholle Kirke Somehow, my SRD has gone down a different route with the theme of connection to how when I was younger, my parents relocated us to Delhi for 4 years, which back then was quite a shock. So I took a stab at my moment in vivid sensory detail...my memory is one of me driving with my mother, who is navigating a traffic jam and I'm thinking we were going to get crushed and shouting out at my mother. The word count of my SRD preceding the memory is 369 words, and my memory section is 201 words, which i feel is quite a lot, though I note you said to aim for ~400 words. - Given my SRD is 570 words in total, is 200 too little? - Tomorrow, I aim to write about why this moment matters (Ari's got Mon-Tues off as it's Malaysian Independence tomorrow, and day after they have a school teacher training day!) . And I'm thinking this is where I bring in the link to connection, and should be closer to the suggested ~400 words. - Full disclosure: I haven't quite worked the connection link out as yet as I'm weirdly writing without an outline, just going with what comes to me!