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Jun 16 •
7-Day Offer Clarity Challenge - Day 6
Finished Day 6? GREAT! Drop your answers and feedback here! Let's see how you think about the way you think😎 - My current offer is Audience clarity score:__/10 Pain clarity score:__/10 Promise clarity score:__/10 Mechanism clarity score:__/10 Deliverables score:__/10 Timeline score:__/10 Pricing score:__/10 Proof score:__/10 CTA score:__/10 Outreach score:__/10 - My weakest part is - What I need feedback on is - My next action is
0 likes • Jul 2
7-Day Offer Clarity Challenge - Day 6 My current offer is My audience is: Business High Ticket Coaches Their painful problem is: Warm Leads incoming are not able to convert into booked ones. The result I help them get is: Increase in existing inbounds leads and warm conversations into qualified booked calls. My mechanism is: Identifying loop holes form leads are slipping out either it is content, ads, funnels not will equipped or any other things. Rebuilding phase: Fixing where it needed to. Testing that refurnished phase and improving. Then Follow up system. My offer includes: Giving predictable direction through Building Acquisition System fixing the leaks between content, inbound leads, and follow-up so more warm prospects become booked calls The timeline is: 4 weeks My price or beta price is : $1000 for the first 4-week build/test while I validate and improve the process with the first few clients. My current proof is: Portfolio or a look video on how can I help them by Fixing their problem. My CTA is: Want me to find the 3 places your leads are leaking before they become booked calls? DM me "CALLS. My outreach method is: Cold emails Audience clarity score: 9/10 Pain clarity score:7/10 Promise clarity score:8/10 Mechanism clarity score:9/10 Deliverables score:9/10 Timeline score:10/10 Pricing score:10/10 Proof score:5/10 CTA score:10/10 Outreach score:6/10 My weakest part is 1. Pain problem : I feel my picked pain problem is still vagued 2. Proof : not confident of how can one hire me on my proof 3. Outreach: Chances of being ignored What I need feedback on is all 3 weak part. My next action is to tighten my 3 weak parts.
Jun 16 •
7-Day Offer Clarity Challenge - Day 5
Finished Day 5? GREAT! Drop your answers and feedback here! - My audience is - Their painful problem is - The result I help them get is - My mechanism is - My offer includes - The timeline is - My price or beta price is - My current proof is - My CTA is - My outreach method is - My one-sentence offer is I help __________ get __________ without __________ using __________ - My simple offer pitch is: I help __________ solve __________ by __________ so they can __________ LET"S BUILD THIS THANGG TOGETHER!
1 like • Jun 27
Day 5 — First Offer Draft My audience is: High Ticket Coaches Their painful problem is: Leads are coming but they don't know from where,and when. Even getting some inbound leads, or having conversations but not enough to convert them into booked calls. The result I help them get is: more consistent predictable booked calls My mechanism is: Identifying loop holes from where leads are slipping out either it is content, ads, funnels not well equipped or any other things. Rebuilding phase:Fixing where it needed to. Testing that refurnished phase and improving. Then Follow up system. My offer includes: Giving predictable direction through Building Acquisition System Lead attracting Ads,Content,Funnels,Follow up system which not only attract leads but actually convert them to booking a call The timeline is: 4 weeks My price or beta price is : 1000$ for a month to check whether it will work or not after launch My current proof is: Portfolio or a look video on how can I help them by Fixing their problem. My CTA is: Click here to get rid of your Problem. My outreach method is: Cold emails My one-sentence offer is: I help high ticket coaches get inbound leads into qualified booked calls without relying on random content, guesswork or hoping using "My Predictable Acquisition System". My simple offer pitch is: I help high ticket coaches solve problem of not getting clients by converting inbounds leads in to booked calls so they can stop hoping, guesswork for how to get more leads.
Jun 27 •
Hey everyone 🤍 Can I ask you something quick?
Hey everyone 🤍 Can I ask you something quick? I wanted to share a little more about where I’m taking this space. For the past while, I’ve been working with business owners on offers, funnels, client acquisition, follow-up, delivery, and proof. And the more I’ve done this, the more I’ve realized something simple - before the funnel, before the content, before the DMs, before the ads, before the sales call… the offer has to make sense🎯 Because when the offer is vague, everything after it feels harder. - Your content feels harder to write. - Your DMs feel awkward. - Your pricing feels random. - Your sales calls feel unclear. - And people don’t fully understand why they should care. So before I build out more resources inside here, I want to make the first step really useful - helping you take the thing you know, the skill you have, or the service you want to offer… and turn it into something clearer, testable, and easier for people to respond to✨ That’s the direction I want Offer-to-Client Lab to grow into - messy idea → clear offer → real conversations → clients → delivery → proof But I don’t want to build the next version from assumptions. I want to build it around where you actually are right now🙌 So which one feels most true for you right now? 1 — I have an idea, but I’m not sure if people would pay for it 2 — I know what I want to offer, but I can’t explain it clearly yet 3 — I have an offer, but I don’t know how to test it 4 — I can get conversations, but not clients yet 5 — I’ve sold something before, but I need better delivery, proof, or a repeatable system Even just commenting a number helps me understand what would be most useful to build next. And if you want to add one messy sentence about what you’re trying to create, that would help even more. I’ll also pick 3 people from this thread for a free clarity conversation this week so I can understand where you’re stuck and help you map the next step. I’d love to build this next version with you, not just for you 🤍
1 like • Jun 27
I think For me there is, 4 — I can get conversations, but not clients yet 5 — I’ve never sold something before, but I need better delivery, proof, or a repeatable system Because my offer is already under construction for testing, to improve, better polishing and ready to go in 7 Day Offer clarity challenge. Other problem I get is : For me outreaching comes with more priority than working more on skills. Yes,improving skills can't be neglected as this is only what brings the result but without outreaching how can one get client....so for that reason outreaching becomes more important. But constantly getting doubt of my skills, is it worth enough to get result if I get client. How can I get rid of this.
Jun 16 •
7-Day Offer Clarity Challenge - Day 4
Finished Day 4? GREAT! Drop your answers and feedback here! - Version 1 - My messy offer: - Version 2 - My clearer offer: - Version 3 - My best current version: Use this formula: I help __________ get __________ without __________ using __________ The biggest improvement I made was: The part that still feels weak is: The goal is for you to self-actualized!
1 like • Jun 26
7-Day Offer Clarity Challenge - Day 4 Version 1 ; Messy Offer Who it is for - High Ticket Coaches/ Agencies What problem they have - Less Conversion of inbound leads into qualified booked calls What result they want - more booked calls How I help - Audit their funnel, check where they are lacking and resigning Version 2 ; My Clearer offer Who it is for - High ticket coaches What problem they have - They don't have prediction from where new clients will be comming, depends on luck or guesswork What result they want - A certainty where my next client will be comming from. How I help - Building "Predictable acquisition Systems" which contains Running Ads, Content marketing, carousels, link to their website in bio, all of which brings them Landing page for qualifying the leads, or to get start email campaign by collecting their email addresses. Version 3 - My best current version Here I am not able to connect what can be my best version offer then version 2 🙂 I help high ticket coaches (niche not targeted) getting them predictable systems for clients inflow with out them being doing guesswork and prayer for new client. The biggest improvement I made was: This time I know to whom I want to help (still niche is unclear) by pointing out their specific problem and giving specific solution for their specific problem. The part that still feels weak is: My best current version as I don't know what it can be.
Jun 16 •
7-Day Offer Clarity Challenge - Day 2
Finished Day 2? GREAT! Drop your answers and feedback here! - I want to help? - With this painful problem? - So they can get this result? - Using this mechanism? - This result is valuable because? - This could be worth paying for because? - The first price I could test is? - Why this price makes sense right now? Don't worry, just start!
1 like • Jun 24
I want to help : High ticket coaches (b2b/DTC), marketing agencies. With this painful problem : low conversion rate, low ctr, low roas, not able to convert warm leads/targeted audience into clients So they can get this result : more traffic, more warm leads then converting into more clients. More ROI Using this mechanism : Being honest I don't have answer for that yet But yes that could around persuasion, triggered pain points that actually make target audience click through This result is valuable because : it is helping by breaking their main stopper for growth This could be worth paying for because : it increases their revenue The first price I could test is : a small project worth 500$ + 20% rev share Why this price makes sense right now : this might be the main problem they are facing in their online presence.
1 like • Jun 25
I have one question that In market some say charge more and some say to charge less. Reason for both is If charged more then client won't perceive as underqualified for him/her But problem come with charging more can be them being skeptical as it is expensive And some say charge less because you are just starting out, without 1st client how will pay you more But problem comes with low pricing is that client feels me as amature or less qualified to work for them and perceived skill/service value automatically decreases. Always have confusion for this
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