My first attempt at creating supply/ demand block. Thoughts/ corrections will be helpful thank you

Hey Fam I’m new and will get started with course 1. But I wanna tell you my why. I thought I wouldn’t find the right path to really learn from a genuine coach. Then I seen the ad and I’m happy about the good spirits to learn freely on my time because I’m a Dad of 2 kids and I want to give them a wonderful childhood. They are my life, I want to increase my skillset and move from check to check to a better life. I will take my time learning what Kyle provided and review 2 to 3 times. I’m highly excited to be here.

Hello Everyone! New to this group. Hope to learn as much as possible! Thanks for having me!

Thanks for everything I learned here. I just passed my first Evaluation Account!!!!!