I know its messy at the end, but what should i polish and with this, how many % do you think that i have of passing the first round? (Ignore my face in the start)

hello! i’m neria, im 13 (my birthday is in 4 days tho lol) and im from the usa! i love love love dancing so much but ive only been training for about a month.. i hope to improve my dancing skills and so excited to be a part of this community!