Guys this is my first E-com funnel design can anyone have experience in the E-com space give me some feedback

Guys I want to start with the e-com niche because I don't like the education space I don't see my self I can do great in the education space has anyone here have any experience work with the e-com Market

Hi Freinds, I did a redesign for this landing page I hope you can give your opinions.

Design 2, Dark Theme Figma Design

Hi Guys, This is my first design I'm trying to design 30 funnels in the next 30 days wish me luck