Hi Hassan! Here are your corrections 😄 1. Iam from east Africa.especially Somalia → I am from East Africa, especially Somalia ✅ Correct: I am from East Africa, especially Somalia. Explanation: - Missing space in "I am" - Missing punctuation - Proper nouns should be capitalized ✔ I am from East Africa, especially Somalia.❌ Iam from east Africa.especially Somalia 2. so if I talk the government how it works → so if I talk about how the government works ✅ Correct: so if I talk about how the government works Explanation:Use the expression: ✔ talk about❌ talk the 3. it genuinely dysfunctions → it is genuinely dysfunctional ✅ Correct: it is genuinely dysfunctional Explanation:"Dysfunctional" is the adjective needed here. ✔ is dysfunctional❌ dysfunctions 4. because of there is no true constitution power → because there is no true constitutional power ✅ Correct: because there is no true constitutional power Explanation: - Remove "of" - Use the adjective "constitutional" ✔ constitutional power❌ constitution power 5. instead there is a Tribalism → instead, there is tribalism ✅ Correct: instead, there is tribalism Explanation: - Add comma after "instead" - "Tribalism" is not capitalized ✔ tribalism❌ Tribalism 6. many people murdered innocent people but they get away with → many people murder innocent people, but they get away with it ✅ Correct: many people murder innocent people, but they get away with it Explanation:The expression requires an object. ✔ get away with it❌ get away with 7. Benefit of Their tribe protects them → the support of their tribe protects them ✅ Correct: the support of their tribe protects them Explanation:More natural wording. ✔ the support of their tribe protects them❌ Benefit of Their tribe protects them 8. many others unfairly accused → many others are unfairly accused ✅ Correct: many others are unfairly accused Explanation:Passive voice is needed. ✔ are unfairly accused❌ unfairly accused 9. they left to languish in jail → they are left to languish in jail

@María José Arellano WOW! Good job Majo!

Hey! Thanks for sharing 😄 Here are your corrections: 1. committe a minor crimes → commit minor crimes ✅ Correct: commit minor crimes Explanation: - "Commit" is the base verb after "or" in this structure. - "Crimes" is plural, so remove "a". ✔ commit minor crimes❌ committe a minor crimes 2. the authority is harsh → the authorities are harsh ✅ Correct: the authorities are harsh Explanation:When referring to police, government officials, or law enforcement in general, use: ✔ the authorities are❌ the authority is 3. from another ethnicity → from a different ethnic background ✅ Correct: from a different ethnic background Explanation:More natural and precise wording. ✔ ethnic background❌ ethnicity (in this context) 4. the authority is linient → the authorities are lenient ✅ Correct: the authorities are lenient Explanation: - "Lenient" spelling correction - Use plural "authorities" ✔ lenient❌ linient 5. with there own rice → with their own race ✅ Correct: with their own race Explanation:Spelling corrections. ✔ their own race❌ there own rice 6. cought red-handed → are caught red-handed ✅ Correct: are caught red-handed Explanation: - "Caught" spelling correction - Passive voice needed ✔ are caught red-handed❌ cought red-handed 7. the justice ignore → the justice system ignores ✅ Correct: the justice system ignores Explanation:More precise subject and correct third-person singular verb. ✔ justice system ignores❌ justice ignore 8. their people get away with their crimes → people get away with their crimes ✅ Correct: people get away with their crimes Explanation:"Their people" sounds unnatural and unclear here. ✔ people get away with their crimes❌ their people get away with their crimes 9. because justice has bias → because the justice system is biased ✅ Correct: because the justice system is biased Explanation:Use the adjective "biased." ✔ is biased❌ has bias