✨This is the first time I'm trying to compose something, so I'm still not sure about it. I want your feedback on the beginning of this song (~the first 8 bars). There's also part of the first verse to help you get a sense of what the rest of the song is like. Please give me your feedback, like: what you think would sound better, what you feel when you listen, something that I need to fix,... I don't know what to do to improve this/to make it sound better😅🙃 (sorry for mistakes, I'm not good at English)😄

Hello I am new here! I am 13 and I want to be a K-pop idol. I love Straykids and kpop