Appreciate the enthusiasm. As we develop the community, there will be a lot of structured opportunities for feedback on specific challenges. I highly encourage watching each other's challenge videos. The 60 second thing is a "White Belt" level constraint. I can 100% appreciate you're a long form content guy, but I promise you the structure here will help. Especially for long form. Like I said to you on the call, constraints will set you free. Feedback: The faces, while simple, are an asset to your story telling. I knew exactly what you were dealing with as soon as I saw "the face." It brought me closer to the moment you were describing. In all your content I have seen, including this, you rarely use your authority, credibility, trust, etc. This is a common one for a lot of people. This video presented as frustrated dad who is a little bit dysregulated. It is "real" and relatable, but it's missing something. It would be more balanced if you acknowledged, even in a single sentence, something like, "I'm a behaviour teacher who has taught boundaries and expectations to hundreds of kids." I would also bring out your super power, curiosity, especially in a video like this. Invite the audience in a bit, if this feels natural. Open questions like "when a child does x behaviour, how would you feel, how would you react?" As I was watching and reflecting, I also thought to myself: Allan has a tendency to reinvent the wheel. What I mean by that is that you seem to value originality very highly. When I watch this, it's like you're building your whole theory of change from direct, lived experience, which is cool, but again missing that important piece around authority, credibility, trust. On the actual situation you describe. I think a lot of caregivers watching may assume this power struggle would keep happening and it just sounds uncomfortable, and they'd be projecting a lot of their experiences onto the story. The most important thing you're missing is OUTCOME. "I do this, one time, the kids get it, and then we can enjoy laughter, instead of turning joy into a power struggle." Or some variation of that.