@Ahmed anes Chiali Hey hey! Been sick so haven’t been on here for a day or so. Let me check on this today and get back to you:)

Hi Leo! Your description does have a CTA in it which is great and it is benefit driven but it’s extremely long and looks very AI written. I would shorten it and focus on benefit to CTA as the focus.

I’ll take a look sometime today most likely! Definitely don’t think you need to be boosting but I’ll get into that in my review

@Chris Daley Okay so initial impressions are that cover letters are too long. Clients are super overwhelmed and your cover letter feels very overwhelming. Well written, but overwhelming. I think they're also a bit to generic. You're talking about the concepts of CPA lead pages and what generally goes wrong or a patient logo in concept rather than talking to them directly. Less "we do this" and more how you help. Here's what I can do for you. Here's what I noticed about YOUR company. I would also completely nix the line about being new to Upwork. We don't want to draw attention to that or "apoligize" in any way for being new. You also use CTA language that is drop a line or let me know when you would like to chat. I'd be more specific. They don't often know how to reach you so saying something like: "send me a private message" gives them a tangible way to do that. I'd also stop boosting its a waste of connects and you can get around that by just creating filters that have less than 5, 5-10, or 10-15 proposals max. No high budgets. With no reviews you just can't land a 1K job on here. Hope this helps a bit! Let me know!

Oh! That’s exciting! How many reviews do you have now?