Hey @Lynn Floyd this sounds like a great niche! Here's my feedback: - I think "Christian foster, adopt and kinship dads" is too difficult to quickly understand. Maybe something like "Christian dads in foster, adoptive, and kinship roles" - It may be my lack of understanding of the niche, but "follow Jesus, form others and finish well" seems a little vague, maybe make it more specific, for example "follow Jesus, disciple others, and leave a lasting legacy" - In general, shortening it might help with clarity and allow you to get more specific, for example if your main focus is leadership, you may make the last part just about discipling others, which gives you room to be more specific, e.g. "disciple others using the 4D Leadership Model" I don't know of many Skool communities that focus on this so this could be a great opportunity!