Mohamed, please post your copy here in the group so /everyone/ can provide feedback. And also, just FYI, at present the Google Docs link doesn't work. Google Docs is kind of finicky; you /always/ want to double-check that you've shared a document. Headline: capitalize "online." ... okay, no. I do not mean any disrespect at all by this — we are all God's children — but you need to run this text through Google Docs' proofreading / grammar check, and then through Hemingway (https://hemingwayapp.com/proofreader). In professional contexts, you have to proofread and polish your copy before you ask others to review and critique it. Hope this helps.