Mohamed, please post your copy here in the group so /everyone/ can provide feedback. And also, just FYI, at present the Google Docs link doesn't work. Google Docs is kind of finicky; you /always/ want to double-check that you've shared a document. Headline: capitalize "online." ... okay, no. I do not mean any disrespect at all by this — we are all God's children — but you need to run this text through Google Docs' proofreading / grammar check, and then through Hemingway (https://hemingwayapp.com/proofreader). In professional contexts, you have to proofread and polish your copy before you ask others to review and critique it. Hope this helps.

I'm writing the home page for my freelance website, and aggressively studying and practicing email copywriting. Brunson's Funnel Hacking Live is this week, so I have negative spare time. It's a living. :)

This is amazing. As an aside, thank you for writing these lessons like a human being, rather than writing them as copy. It's much easier to learn from normal expository prose than from words that have been Halbertified™.

@Mary Javier Just FYI, "a copy" is ungrammatical. It's always "copy," for example I'd write, "how to break down copy effectively." "Copy," in English, doesn't take the indefinite article ("a").

This would be dope!