I know that there are some producers out here cab any of you give me thoughts on this it’s literally my first attempt at mixing couldn’t wait for my comp to come so just did something on the phone it’s probably horrible but I’m a true beginner what can be changed

I’m getting more interested in the visual side of music ( give GOD full credit he basically beat me in my head with it till I stop ignoring how important and cool it is) these are some I’ve done recently what do yall think ( I’m a true beginner)

Does this get across the message I want to share well what do yall think of the song

During this first assignment, I realized a majority of my content plan feels borrowed by other artists or feels too generic and uninspiring to follow through on. So, I’m curious: what parts of your content plans feel “unique” to you and what life experiences led to those ideas? Did you also struggle with this? Let me know in the comments.

These are some of what I have so far anyone have any better ideas or are these good ( be brutally honest🙁)