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Ad Critique
I wrote a spec ad for a brand called Hydronate. This is my first time creating a static ad, writing primary text, and all that stuff, so I would like some critique on it. And also writing my first brief, so I would like some critique on that. Here it is: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11w7nUwGiViUuSTz0Y0mMLUmUwbX-lTMwVexsLIphfYg/edit?usp=sharing I also learned a lot just from this first ad. One is the importance of understanding the product. I had to tweak and rewrite about 4 times because I didn't fully understand the product. From general research when I was looking for ideas, I also realized how brands can just switch hooks and leave the rest of the ad the same, even for UGC content, and that was kind of cool to learn.
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@Nabeel Azeez thanks.
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@Nabeel Azeez Hook redone. I'm so glad I did this, I feel like the hook is so much better. UPDATED DOC: https://docs.google.com/document/d/11w7nUwGiViUuSTz0Y0mMLUmUwbX-lTMwVexsLIphfYg/edit?usp=sharing UPDATED HOOKS: HOOK 1: When I told Luke about the good news, I didn’t feel his excitement. He told me, "Remember, my mom had a heart attack with an LDL of 99, so it doesn't really mean anything." This was a hard one to swallow. But it wasn’t as hard as 3 weeks before when I got the checkup itself. [...] HOOK 2: The receptionist was super nice and always put a smile on my face before I got my blood drawn. But behind the smile, I knew I could end up in tears yet again. If I hadn't been able to get my LDL down because of that Japanese research paper, I would still hate everything that had to do with getting my cholesterol checked. [...] Let me know what you think.
First win with CS
I just landed a freelance contract with a 8-figure skincare DTC brand. I will be onboarded next week. And a big shoutout to @Nabeel Azeez. Thank you so much sir and thank you for everyone that helped me in this community. Without Copywriting Launchpad, i probably can't make this.😇
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Review my ecom email
This is my first time writing an ECOM email; I've only ever done direct response. This is just spec work for a brand called KILOS GEAR that sells light outdoor equipment. And this would be an initial welcome email for them. Roast it as hard as you can. Thanks
Review my ecom email
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@Nabeel Azeez This is the first email they send when someone opts in
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@Nabeel Azeez can you give a critique on the email though, like a email copy critique
Broken down winning ad
I went on the FB Ads library to find winning ads. I found this paid school group that has a lot of members, so I went to check out their ads. I chose the top one, handwrote it, broke it down, created a formula and rewrote another ad with it. Check it out here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1f9B2iT8UPMoclBIj8zpZMBLBNRgOSpsavfa68a0Y3DQ/edit?usp=sharing Let me know what you think. formula, Thanks
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@Julius S thanks
Quick Question
Hi @Nabeel Azeez , i got a Dm and he asked: how much would you charge for a trial task? just one video My answer: I will ask: “How much do you currently spend on ads a day” “What video format do you want me to make ?” Example if he say 6 figure I will answer “I will charge $60 for the video, guaranteed to spend 5 figures on it or your money back” What mistakes do i make ? How can i answer this question better ? Thanks @Nabeel Azeez for honest feedback
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Hope you land him !!!
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