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5 Feb
There's this cafe I used to go to– I lived just down the road. With mismatched, gray and salmon tiles. For years, it felt like home. I left the suburb a while ago, thinking that it was best. The fence that borders our little home, surrounded by my ex. The yellow door that kept us safe, windows of painted glass. I walked through shattered glass.
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Thanks for the suggestion, I was referring to the last four lines. My version leans into sensory details and rhythm, While the recommended changes smooth it out, The less immediate reflection doesn't feel like me. For example With mismatched, grey and salmon tiles. A specific tactile and visual has an internal rhythm The word structure is unique to my style of writing The tiles haven’t changed only the way I stand there I feel it is more generalised, less sensory. Removes the intimacy, with the pacing and breath changing. Also, I'm not entirely sure what you mean by from the far side of my life – That is an interesting combination of words, Could you elaborate more?
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I’m enjoying this conversation, While I can/do sometimes write in the POV of aftermath, as my writing matures I find myself wanting to bring people into a moment. Everyone has different styles I find it interesting to explore other people connect to my writing particularly. I natural lean towards minimalistic— often it feels like to many words over-explain a sentiment. With fewer words, the emotional has more place to land. I also notice that when language expanse too much, it begins to circle back on itself or drift into borrowed emotional phrases. Does that make sense?
6 Feb(was written on the 6
so many years, I hid away. uresponsible and free I farmed out the essential beneath a dome for 3. Nah— a dome of four., Me, I, her— and she Four worlds, one mind Parallel In time collective …are we.
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Thank you, I posted description of how I see my style of writing, Or at least writing that I unconsciously lean towards On the challenge write. I hope it's helpful
10 feb
Free form: craft in relocation free verse and what I enjoy writing. Became dominant in the 20th century because poets want to move away from traditional style. traditional forms – (Shakespeare) – visible structure iambic pantameter, da-DUM da-Dum da-Dum syllable count predictable lines that often rhyme(ha funny) free verse isn't anything goes, It still has a rhythm created through emotions, breath, or thought. Emotional honesty over ornament. Psychological realism voice-over form used well : has an internal rhyme(and somtimes internal ryhme) uses line breaks purposefully, leans into Minimalism uses white space as a part of meaning. Used poorly, it can sound like chopped-up sentences with no internal music and random line breaks. In traditionalists or forming writing circles The style can be looked upon as a lack of training, a lack of depth, reliant on clichés. But free verse removes external constraint– which means you must create internal discipline yourself. so thus – free verse isn't the absence of craft, It's just relocated.
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9 Feb
The porch Boundaries are higher, Words are shorter.. Listening is deeper. I don’t want to; can be a thing. (Smile) Sort the Rainbows Familiar… Watching the circle Quite… Hannah’s our friend Yes, I think Hannah’s right. (Smile)
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8 Feb
I have put this on another group. https://vocal.media/authors/kiana-carda Which I write under a pseudonym. Ragtime - performative piece's Isn't it funny? [inhale] that the place I now love the most… I never brought you to? [inhale] [in one breath] There’s no you on the seat, no smile across the bar– No tapping. No trace. [inhale] ...No essence of you. The lights hum low, as the saxophone sighs- [wistful] and for the first time in months. [inhale] I don’t feel watched by a memory. [exhale] It's just strangers– red wine and me Listening to the sound of someone else’s heartbreak.
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I write to make sense of the noise. Fragments, poems, and unfinished thoughts — shared as they are, not polished into something else.

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