Crazy improvements from your demo, nice job man

@Jackson Choran Appreciate it bro!

Hey man, like the track a lot. Couple things to consider: Sidechaining your vox delay, would help a lot with clarity during the verses. Automating a low cut on your instruments in the build, would help the drop hit harder. Adding more variety into your drop drums, could add fills during the gaps of your saw stack. Maybe shift the drop vocal over 2 beats to where it is in the original track, the first time I listened to it, it felt a little strange. The vocal artifacts are pretty bad coming out of the first drop, maybe consider adding a couple more elements to help mask the imperfections in the vocal. The guitar you added in the second build is a bit unexpected, as it doesn't follow the chord progression you have been using the entire track, maybe consider chopping it up and pitching it to follow. Other than that, I think it's really solid, great work!