I also think it's quite good one thing I can say is that it feels as though ur movements don't have a lot of control like they're a little flimsy I think slowing everything down and working on really controlling every movement u make will make it look a lot cleaner but overall it was great
If you couldn't tell it's "All of me" John Legend. Kind yet strict criticism. Thank you! The second one is "Believer" by Imagine Dragons. This is after my consideration of feedback. Please compare the two and give feedback!
The feedback i can offer is what I noticed is that ur breath control was really there and that caused ur voice to sound weak and some slight cracks i can also say that at the start ur words sounded a little rushed and some of it was a little out of tune so I think u should work on breath control and training ur ear also staying in tune. It was a fantastic performance tho