@Dave Hughes That's a really good advice as I did change some things around but forgot to put back the JOIN NOW !! I can't take the credit as I was stuggling with the opening and paid a pro copywriter to do this one for me ! I guess it did worked :D

@Dave Hughes Yes it does, but skool don't bring me much people other than other teachers like me checking how I manage my community. I had only 4 people join from the skool network and they all are language or french teacher. Everything else is youtube and me sending people one on one

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Autosubs never works for Québec French we're cursed !! I feel Imma get totally destroyed by @Alec Graf on the video and I'm ready for it !!

@Alec Graf that's some great idea ! especially about the high and low, my tracks are like a roller coaster sometime I will try to implement that!!

Imma be gentle ! I started watching and first thing that I wasn't sold on was the intro, I still felt like I have no idea what I am watching after 30 seconds, and I'm not a big fan of "and the second one is the one messing people up the most!" We already know that you are gonna tell us the 3 mistakes in the title, so saying at the beginning that in this video we will see 3 mistakes, we already know that, (I was picturing a visual with the 3 mistakes keyword or something, just so I can be more interested and know what I am about to watch) And then there is a small intro song, and you come back and say: So today in this video I am gonna share 3 mistakes.. ! :O (I just went to your channel to see if your thumbnail also says something about the 3 mistakes but good job you didn't !) There is also no Timestamp, so if you hover over video you don't really know where you are. I feel like you are hiding what you will actually teach inside the video, so that we watch it fully to know what's inside, BUT When you pick up a book, first thing you read is probably the table of content, to get an overview of the book (At least that's what I do, and it does excite me to see an overview of what Imma learn) On another topic, I see the video is exported as 4k, but I can't be fooled, it is grainy and quite low quality, what are you using to film ? Because I am surprised, the light seems to be good, it just doesn't even feel 1080p Hopefully I am gentle enough ! TLDR: Shorter intro, timestamps, better camera !

The only thing that got my attention was that it was hard for me to understand at first because of accent and the fact that english is my second language, but I put the subtitles to help. But definitively when I clicked the video I instantly though Ohh imma roast that, but it's really not that bad now that I have watched the full thing. Also the low amount of people in the group, the example show a group that went from 4 to 80 but your group has 31! You nearly made me join but Imma tell you why I am not joining. There is sooo much group that help with theses kind of thing and my list of skool I joined is getting big it's hard for me to stay focus especially since every group require some commitment. I'm too busy rn for more dm, more stuff to do, even tho It might be really good ! Happy success !