I'm the kind of person who would believe someone who says, "Gullible is not in the dictionary." And still, I didn't see any reason to believe your proclamations. Please brainstorm reasons and choose the ones that are best in this context, on this page. No need to effort the brainstorming. You can let them bubble up, percolate.

Good to see you here. My main concern is that you don't have anything about your experience, your credibility. It's easy to assume you've got it. The offerings are intelligent, requiring an expert to be behind it, offering it. At the same time, I'm not sure it is optimal to count on people to assume it. Partly because a good track record helps with trust. At Skool, that might be the most important thing in people's decision making. Even if a survey were to get other things ranked higher...they would be ranked higher only because people don't realize trust is a big intuitional or subconscious influence. The 5 spots left is going to bring people in. It will distract from trust/qualifications/credibility. You'll have 5 people immediately. You can wait until you erase that part and have more room to tackle adding on your professional background or something about how pleased your clients have been over the years.

I have one small detail. It's at the end which makes it important. (My intuition says that at least in this case, what you're presenting, the first two sections and the final grouping are the most important parts.) The question marks at the end of each phrase need to go. No punctuation. Also the question marks as the symbol. You are leaving them with answers, not with questions. There's something maybe jarring, something not reassuring, and something disrupting the flow, the clarity, coming from question marks in that section. Entirely my personal experience.

@Aimee Jardon I'm curious. How did you find out about Roasters, Aimee, if you don't mind telling.

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Thank you. I knew that. And I forgt.

The numbers say it all. People are interested in this. Thanks for clarifying the idea for me. @Chris K. Davidson