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Email Review
Drop a like and drop your emails here and I'll review them tomorrow first hour. Let's get it 💪
0 likes • 8d
@Zain Ulabdin waiting for access
0 likes • 6d
@Keny Arjenis A lot to work on, the email doesn't have a specific target audience, is not clear in some areas, a lot of spelling mistakes, and doesn't offer a clear solution to a problem. But with time you will improve. Best of luck 👍
Free Sample, what do you think?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1maRlFOxAf5ZNdw8LAfnbgJJ9GhaVDyEPgf-cmlxwCp4/edit?usp=sharing I disabled comments on purpose, please just give me a short review in here, what would you change, what do you like most and so on
1 like • 15d
Just off the bat, you need to put the text on the left and make the font bigger. Your hook is not that strong, need a more intriguing one. Didn't build much of a authority in the email and didn't explain the process. But strong message and good potential. Hope it helps
2 likes • 19d
@Matyas Franc Left you something. Hope it helps
1 like • 18d
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zzDfCoKa5aLwiy9pvYmeubuEw3h5fW3XZGEIMrdXnnA/edit?tab=t.0 there you go
Sales Communication
If I want to help someone with their emails because what they have now are ass. How the hell do I tell them that their email is trash without actually saying it?
1 like • 18d
Well try to tell them what's wrong in a constructive way and they should understand. If you have patience to explain to them what's wrong you should be fine. No one started with perfection so he/she is just a few steps behind Also try to borrow authority to further prove your point (if you didn't built any in the first place)
Review
Anyone looking for review for their email drop it
0 likes • 18d
@Nils Prenclavs Left you something at the end :)
0 likes • 18d
@Siboniso Mnyandu ofc https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vec8Zh4o39yY5gse9u5bK7f2_3zxqa_I5Dyp7uvQ2JU/edit?usp=sharing
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Denis Doni
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3points to level up
@denis-doni-3387
A college student from Bucharest, currently learning economy and studying Copywriting aside from school.

Active 17h ago
Joined Oct 24, 2024
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