@Zain Ulabdin waiting for access

@Keny Arjenis A lot to work on, the email doesn't have a specific target audience, is not clear in some areas, a lot of spelling mistakes, and doesn't offer a clear solution to a problem. But with time you will improve. Best of luck 👍

Just off the bat, you need to put the text on the left and make the font bigger. Your hook is not that strong, need a more intriguing one. Didn't build much of a authority in the email and didn't explain the process. But strong message and good potential. Hope it helps

@Matyas Franc Left you something. Hope it helps

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1zzDfCoKa5aLwiy9pvYmeubuEw3h5fW3XZGEIMrdXnnA/edit?tab=t.0 there you go

Well try to tell them what's wrong in a constructive way and they should understand. If you have patience to explain to them what's wrong you should be fine. No one started with perfection so he/she is just a few steps behind Also try to borrow authority to further prove your point (if you didn't built any in the first place)