I have seen the triangle model before, laid out a little differently. This looks busy - maybe ideal as the version you would keep for yourself. Lots of 3 words/phrases in the whole picture makes it visibly tiring for me. A simpler version to show would be better for clarity. Just seen Isabella's comment above, and a build up would be great. In the version I was taught, the word at the bottom is the most significant, the foundation or keystone. I wonder whether IDENTITY would be my choice... The centre is busy with 3 words. Visually would it be better to have them stacked shortest to longest: visible, confident, in-demand? Or use those words verbally and find an alternative word or phrase that embodies these. Visible/visibility looks like repetition. I like the arrows that give the eyes direction.