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Unpublishable

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For readers and writers who love it dark. Very dark.

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from "Alice Ate the Rabbit"
An insight into the empire that Alice will soon discover she'll inherit. (my attempt to drop some exposition into a salacious scene without it being an info dump) -- The Carpathian Mountains, 380 miles northwest of Bucharest By the time the Range Rover turned off the E81 and headed up through the long, narrow village of Stolna, they’d already been driving for six hours. It would take another hour, crawling higher into the Southern Carpathians, before they’d arrive at the castle. Lars cursed his old man’s bladder and tapped on the partition separating him from the driver. Hopefully this stop would be the last before their destination. The snow fell heavily now, settling in the needles of the Silver Fir trees. Outside, the air bit him sharply, and he rubbed his liver-spotted hands together for warmth. Standing behind a tree, fumbling with his zip, Lars reflected that no matter how rich or powerful a man was, he still needed to take a piss like the poorest of men. It was one of nature’s levelers. Ten minutes further up the road, the driver switched into four-wheel drive mode and engaged the lower gear ratio as the tyres crunched through an inch of snow. The remaining hour became two, and Lars dozed off. He woke when they made the final turn into a steep, unmarked driveway. Wrought-iron gates slid aside to allow them entry. Here, the forest thinned, the altitude too high, and the terrain too rocky for many trees to lay down roots. Craggy cliffs of grey shale loomed above, and on a massive outcrop, the castle stood majestically. It always exuded an eerie dominance over the landscape, but this afternoon, in the half-light of the snowstorm, its visage was haunting. The original castle, constructed seven centuries ago in the Byzantine era, had been largely swallowed by each generation of extensions and modifications. The resulting edifice now resembled a chaotic citadel. Jagged towers rose above the curtained stone walls snaking around the mountainside. Most of the vertical slitted windows set into the ancient masonry were dark, but a few in the east wing glowed the sickly yellow of cat’s eyes, squinting at prey. Blue lights blinked atop the most incongruous modern addition, a helipad, rendered useless today by the weather.
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From "The Purity Project"
I fear some of my stuff might be too dark for anywhere else, so I'll put it here instead. This novella is definitely unpublishable. Its set within the Third Reich's Lebensborn program and told from the point of view of the participants. The intention isn't to glorify the Third Reich, although the characters certainly see it as glorious because they've been denied a moral compass. (or at least had it blinded). I still love my characters. Shrug. Here's a scene from early on... ---- Kristina raised her hand and asked matter-of-factly, "Are we going to have babies?" "Yes, hopefully," Greta answered. "Perfect German babies. But tonight, a treat. We're dining in the city. You'll be collected from your homes between six and six thirty. Wear your uniforms, to make your school proud, but also these." She opened a velvet-lined mahogany jewellery box and beckoned them to come forward. Nellie was first and her eyes shone as Greta pinned a silver brooch to her lapel. The upward-pointing lightning bolt, symbol of the Lebensborn program, with the slanted SS beneath. When everyone had theirs, Greta said, "Wear them with pride. But act with good graces. I know you will." In the evening, under a soft drizzle of rain, highly polished limousines crept through the suburbs collecting the eight students from their homes. The driver opened and closed the rear door for each VIP. They left behind parents still coming to terms with their family's good fortune. A uniformed doorman in bottle-green, with brass buttons and white gloves, greeted them on arrival at the finest restaurant in the city. He ushered them through heavy wooden doors with frosted glass panels etched in Art Deco geometrics. The doorman held the students in the foyer until they had all arrived and then led them through to the dining room. Greta was there waiting for them, sat at a long central table, surrounded by smaller tables with regular guests. The girls marveled at the cream wainscoted walls, deep burgundy drapes, and the thick wine-coloured carpet that hushed their footsteps. All warmly lit by wall sconces of frosted glass. Their table had been dressed in a crisp ivory-white tablecloth, the linen folded so sharply at the corners it could have been paper. The nine place settings held heavy silverware—three forks, two knives, two spoons—and a wine goblet at each place.
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Another scene, a bit later on... (Gisel is an SS Officer, assigned to make sure Greta and her cohort stay in line. She appears from time to time, unannounced.) _ Gisel arrived with no warning, her staff car screeching to a halt behind the wing. It was Kristin who answered the banging on the rear door, opening it to see a Gisel manhandling an angry young woman in a regular army uniform, who hissed and scratched like a cat at the officer’s leather jacket. She was almost dragging her captor off her feet. “Some.... assistance… please” Gisel said while fighting to stay upright. Kirstin stepped into the alley, dodged behind Gisel’s prisoner and grabbed both flailing arms, twisting them behind the woman’s back and pushing her inside. An upbringing on a farm, dealing with animals much larger than this one, proved valuable. It was no more difficult than roping a bucking cattle beast. When the captive, now her's rather than Gisel's, tried to kick out, Kirstin put paid to that by kneeing her in the back of the thigh. She marched her down the corridor and shoved her into the conception room, with the officer following. Greta came running from her office to see what all the commotion was about. “A rather reluctant subject.” Gisel said, straightening her leather jacket. Her single braid had become undone, and she swept the tangled mess behind her head. The female private, Greta noticed her rank from the shoulder lapels, still struggled in Kristin’s grip, but the attempts to escape were now half-hearted. The girl was still furious though. Her soft, oval face might be pretty when she wasn’t scowling. The short bob of her strawberry blonde hair had survived the encounter much better than the SS braid. Kristin hadn’t said a word. She simply stood, bracing herself against the end of the bed, ready to tighten her hold if the private tried anything. Gisel looked at Kristin with admiration. “Well, I know who to call when I need some muscle.” “Not muscle, just tactics.” Kristin said, grinning.
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and now I don't like it as much. It reads too distantly. Shrug.
INTRODUCTION POST
Tell us who you are, and what you write. You don't need to share your name. You don't need a publishing credit or a finished manuscript. All you need is a love for dark, fearless storytelling. Tell us: What kind of dark fiction do you write or read? Which author or book pulled you into this world? What are you working on right now? We'll start, this is a place where your darkest ideas finally have a room to breathe.
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@Ruki Soto welcome! and sorry about being so late. Yes agree, if the character's are fictional then anything goes. (although personally, I don't like animals being hurt. anyway, make yourself at home!)
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@Autumn-Diana Standingwolf omg, i only just saw your post here. That's how good a group leader I am :-( Depending on the definition of Dark... the first horror I read was Stephen King's Firestarter (And subseqently devoured everything of his at the time) If that doesn't qualify then maybe Dracula. Not as young as nine though. At nine I was probably just falling out of trees rather than reading much. Not working on much writing-wise at the moment. Want to tho. A Minotaur romance sounds intriguing!
Group news
Hi everyone, My initial energy and motivation to build a group for those of us who write unpublishable stories has waned somewhat. Not because I don't believe such a group should and could thrive, but because I'll struggle to do it justice. So, this is just a heads up, that the group might not become what it could be. I'll give it some time though. We only have 24 members but I'd hate if even one person was engaged and then discovered everything gone without warning (and to be honest, i'm not even sure what happens to a skool group if its owner/admin withdraws). Maybe something happens and it takes off, or I see the light, or renew the urge... I dunno. (Does anyone want to step up as an admin and/or promoter?) But in the meantime, there's a group with a similar vibe, but with more activity and a much more motivated leader. I invite you to head on over to The Dark Fiction Cafe' https://www.skool.com/dark-fiction-cafe-2489/about?ref=6f3b92342b8e46d192c5724da26eae23
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@Autumn-Diana Standingwolf Thank you :-) I'll give members a couple more reminders well in advance of closing the group, with links to yours so that they have every opportunity of finding it. I might keep this one as a repository for my darker stuff, but yours will undoubtedly provide more interaction and value for people.
Lichen
Small fractures Fissuring my muscles and veins Each comment degrading Pushing me deep Further away from what I can know Each comment living Upon my flesh Taking shape Gaining a personality of its own Volition My muscles depreciating under the pressure My veins collapsing Time to veer Reconstruction I live not knowing about The shape these lichen create Affecting me Growing me to an unknown Until I am no longer mine own entity A duplicate thriving inside me A counter character existing Alive as my skin Not me but we Is who you meet Can you see the lichen The debris with a foundation upon me Do I protest Or can I get away with this disguise I keep on living The heavy lichen burdening Until I lay in the sun Revealing And one by one the scales fall away original poem by Lisa Karasek
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Davi Mai
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I write transgressive fiction across multiple genres. Have self-published a handful of novellas and one novel, "Alice Ate the Rabbit".

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