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Do You Fit In? (Sample)
And back in the studio…. There are two versions of this track sample and I want honest ears on both before I move forward. Version 1 Version 2 And tell me why: which one feels more haunting, more cinematic, more emotionally exact, more replayable? I’m listening for: the vocal tone, pacing, atmosphere, tension, and which version actually leaves a mark after the 1:20 ends. Help me choose which version of “Do You Fit In?” deserves the next stage.
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4 likes • 4d
The words are shards of info The current line tells me all i need to know Like I have permission to fit in... But I dont have the fit in .... Unless I earn the amulet....
2 likes • 22h
@Miss Lady
I Was a Sky
Soooooo your girl was been in the studio….😏 And as I finally finalize work on this long time coming LP, I need your help! ⏳ Anticipated release 2027 ⏳ There are two versions of this track sample and I want honest ears on both before I move forward. Version I Version II Vote below: 1 = Version I 2 = Version II And tell me why: which one feels more haunting, more cinematic, more emotionally exact, more replayable? I’m listening for: the vocal tone, pacing, atmosphere, tension, and which version actually leaves a mark after the 1:40 ends. Help me choose which version of “I Was a Sky” deserves the next stage. 🌌
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3 members have voted
4 likes • 12d
V1 was tight V2.........C4 to the door no BEEF NO MORE....
Acts 432HRTZ
This is the Book of Performance A grade that shows up when you don't A sentence that came with no corrections A line that never paused it came with expectations that were never met It gave my nervous system a jolt While I spent the galaxy waiting for a response Then it fell Into a abyss of lava that discernment didn't volley back a echo A familiar place of Chaos It wrote itself in and etched out templates that are hardened by missed opportunities So I stood there on a ship that left the shore when the berth lost the birth of something good aborted....... Dry and parched the hull of it scarred The ballast overturned in design It never had structural integrity So with a picket sign of its cool with shades on As the old man says ... Wait for the Sun on the Horizon Another ship comes in the distance.... Acts of Poems.... ©️thelyricalexodus #tresduravia
Topic Poll!
As always, we invite our members to contribute their thoughts and ideas on the next releases. Using One Word, please comment on what the next mini course be about. I.e. — Parenting, Money Management, Gardening, Self Sufficiency, Conflict Resolution, etc. We will take the top two and release one course this month and next month.
4 likes • 22d
Healing
Tall Latisha (noun)
Stop if you heard this one Tee Tee came home from work and stopped by Taco Bell Let's just say the meal wasn't adding up in her stomach... Her Man .....Ray-Ray was at the Playstation playing the game She ran past him went in the bathroom and called out "" Ray-Ray bring me some Tall Latisha " He said " i dont know a Tall Latisha " " stopped cheating with them basketball babes long time ago "..... Tee Tee said " Naw....aint none here with me" ..... he jumped up and kicked the door open...threw some "Tall Latisha " in and sat down! They been married for "Sebben" years... Or whatever she said.... ©️thelyricalexodus #tresduravia
3 likes • 28d
@Tierrah Nicole
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Craven Smith
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Just a Poet with a Pen..learning to listen and write for excellence

Active 22h ago
Joined Oct 11, 2025
Gulfport MS
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