Good afternoon EYS team and peers, practice makes perfect. Any feedback is greatly appreciated.

Good afternoon team and peers, my Wintheview was approved but I wanted to revise it due to the feedback I was given from the EYS team, any feedback is helpful, thank you and God bless you all! https://api.wintheview.com/1159/corlantaylorportfolio

Hi EYS team, this is my revised version of my porfolio, any feedback is helpful! https://api.wintheview.com/1159/corlantaylorportfolio

Hi team and peers, this is my first attempt on getting my career portfolio approved, any advice is helpful. https://api.wintheview.com/1159/corlantaylorportfolio

Hi team and peers, this is my second attempt to get approved, please give feedback. Any advice is helpful. Thank you!