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Apr 19 •
3 Copy Fixes That Can 3x Your Conversion — Breakdown Inside
Most of you are making one of these 3 mistakes.If you’re doing ANY of these, you’re losing money, period. Breakdown: Clear mistake 1: Overwriting the intro Clear mistake 2: Weak CTA Clear mistake 3: Talking features instead of pain If you want me to roast your landing page/email/ad copy, drop it below. Or if you're already working with clients and want to get help handling projects, let’s talk.
0 likes • Apr 19
@Wilson Julio This email’s dangerous in a good way. Left some comments there. Keep going.
1 like • Mar 11
@Corey Bert Add value in your outreach because it is the key for landing clients
Feb 21 •
Drop you copy for review.
Here is mine out of 10? https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Qx4c63EjmJe62LLzCyH0r5pSNXz7XBdH0neZvKdf-kc/edit?usp=sharing
0 likes • Mar 1
@Sean mark Claud First subject line Needs to be changed make one that make them curious to open the email. The opening of the Gmail first of all it's too long second it's missing a word which is "get" Before the word "anything" So you get to pay attention for your writing, you have to make the opening easy to be read And don't stick a lot of sentences together. Also you are using a lot of "And" At the first of the sentences make it more smooth. Work hard on yourself you have a lot of potential and I'm open for you to send me your copies at anytime to review it.
0 likes • Mar 1
@Lester Heyler Subject line is very good The opening of the email it is really good I like it which means other will like it. In the middle of the email I got lost a little bit so try to make it easier to understand and read. but overall that was a really great wor .
Feb 19 •
Drop Your Email/Copy/Outreach Here To Review
Here Is Mine. Give Me Your Best. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1xUlnXhKANqs3wGiGpopvRNo3rHa9-FymEDQx-MbRYwc/edit?usp=sharing
1 like • Feb 24
@Fadel Rise great 7/10
1 like • Feb 24
@Afonso Moura You can do better on Sl The opening kind of good 6.5/10
0 likes • Feb 24
@David Afonso Sl 2/10 the opening is great 8/10 the rest 7/10
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