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Review this caption:
Made an IG caption for my client, Mo: โ€œIf youโ€™re between 18-22 years old, this videoโ€™s for you. You ever feel like you just donโ€™t know โ€˜enoughโ€™ yet? I mean, you do the research. You watched 8 YouTube videos. And you listen to podcasts at 2x speed. But youโ€™re just too scared to put that information into action? Yeah, youโ€™re not a loner, lol. I was there too. But the difference between me now, and you now, is that I took action and continue taking action, But you arenโ€™t. So why not? Stop trying to get the perfect information in the beginning. That's like โ€˜playingโ€™ basketball but never shooting for the hoop. Youโ€™re just standing there, analyzing the โ€˜perfectโ€™ throw. You already have the ball in your hands, just shoot for the basket already. And sure, the first try is gonna be a flop, but you have to continue failing before you make it in. #selfimprovement #personalbrand #entrepreneur
2 likes โ€ข Mar '25
I wouldn't say 8 YouTube Videos, say several or hundreds and I'd make a clear statement at the end like: If you give your best everyday it's impossible to lose. or Don't overthink it, just remember: Learning by doing
COPY REVIEW! ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ
Give me the Copy's and I try to review them ASAP. ( You can also review mine ) : https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-Yu0Y5rG5abD-CBGFXWuiyG5-wouKACcZ_0nAcbVn4k/edit
1 like โ€ข Feb '25
@Percival De Jesus Add more details and give value to them ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
0 likes โ€ข Feb '25
@Percival De Jesus Yeah, I shared the false copy ๐Ÿ˜…
Throw your copyโ€™s at my, I tryna read them all. ( Wanna learn something, Iโ€™m just at the beginning ) ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ
You can also review mine, please donโ€™t be shy, criticize everything you find: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-pyD76J06wY8ftbPesgx4rBJmYDbcPdLEO3Oxy0GmKA/edit Good evening guys
1 like โ€ข Feb '25
@Lukas Xie Your CTA is too soft and you have to tell them more about their problems they'll face if they klick in this link or something like that ... ๐Ÿ‘Š๐Ÿผ 7.5/10
1 like โ€ข Feb '25
@Lukas Xie Your Email could be funnier and more in detail, but not that bad ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ๐Ÿ”ฅ
Drop your copy below
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0 likes โ€ข Feb '25
https://docs.google.com/document/d/10W8sQadNlfNn27WgPNVZ7e9hmI47YptumA2ZDWS5914/edit Thank you man, is about Closing Real Estate Clients
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
From now on, Every month or so I will create a new post like this and you can submit your copy or outreach in the comments below. Other people will still be able to review it, And you can still leave comments to each other, While we make everything more organized. Here is the template for how you should share your copy: "<type of copy> in <niche>: <link>" Example: 3 Emails in the fitness niche: <link> Here is the template for how you should share your outreach: "<type of outreach>: <link>" Example: Instagram DM outreach: <link> Now share your copy and outreach in the comments below until the end of the week, And make sure you come here to review other people's copy & outreach as well! That's it for this update. Costin.
[NEW] POST YOUR COPY/OUTREACH HERE (MEGATHREAD)
0 likes โ€ข Feb '25
Itโ€™s my second Copy, need some review ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿผ thx https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pi4jIuyBYCdGxCCBWhQx-iQaH539ekuKh54ylXpL-fY/edit
0 likes โ€ข Feb '25
@Virat Yadav Simpel, Short, the first line could be shorter and a more curious SL, but I like it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ Could you review mine?: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Pi4jIuyBYCdGxCCBWhQx-iQaH539ekuKh54ylXpL-fY/edit
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Benedikt Seiling
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@benedikt-seiling-8473
Jr. CopyWriter l 14 y. o. | Just starting my journey ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿš€

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