@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Very good points, Paulo. With the caveat that I wonder whether the VSL shouldn't be earlier in the "funnel". By the time a prospect arrives at the about page, I'm thinking an overview of the community is perfect so they know *what* they're buying into. They've already heard the *why* from the earlier VSL (on IG? YT?).

@Eric William

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Here's some possibilities: Top Synonyms for Pitch (Noun) - Proposal: A formal plan or suggestion. - Presentation: A formal delivery of information. - Spiel: An informal, often fast-paced, sales talk. - Sales Talk/Patter: Persuasive, routine speech designed to sell. - Proposition: An offer or idea presented for consideration. - Elevator Pitch/Speech: A concise summary of a proposal. Top Synonyms for Pitch (Verb/Action) - Present: Formally introducing a proposal or plan. - Promote: Publicly advocating for a product or idea. - Propose: Putting forward a plan, such as a project. - Sell/Pitch an idea: Convincing someone to adopt a perspective. - Submit a bid: Formally offering a price or proposal. - Tout: Bragging about or pushing a product (often informal). - Plug: To promote, often used in media/advertising. Keep in mind: "Elevator Pitch" is not advised.... Nor is to "Pitch an Idea"... 🤣

Here's a few: Brand Like a Boss I doubt any of us need to be introduced to this fantastic Skool, but just in case there's anyone lagging behind: Learn how to make presentations that are fun and professional at the same time, from the inimitable Lion Fludd. Non-Negotiable Growth Helping Skoolers grow their community and revenue by ensuring their highest ROI tasks get executed every single day using the Non-Negotiable System. Serious intent, but done in a fun way by a genius Gen-Zer from whom even us old-folks can learn a thing or three. Skoolyard Learn how to make money on Skool without social media, paid ads or cold DMs. Very fun, light-hearted and a great place to meet good folks struggling with the same questions you might be, as a Skool owner.

@Lion Fludd It does!!!

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster recommendation: get on a call with @Lion Fludd. I did yesterday, and he created a miracle. My first interview ever and it looks really really good. There’s stuff that I can use for my about page. Other things I can use in other places. It’s not at all easy putting together even a simple production like what you did. But working with Lion you can be certain it’s gonna come out good.

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster bravo! Better too busy than sitting around doing nothing