@Rena Nicole So I did a soft audit on this because it is hard look to at it and say what is wrong with it. The biggest question should be asked first who are you talking to? It isn't clear what this community is. 1. The page doesn't speak to one person. The audience is four roles. 2. There are several competing asks: three tiers, watch the shows, pitch the shows, sponsor. 3. Names and abbreviations are never explained (Weirdos, Pajama Party, Collaboration Station, Agents of Peace, Patrons of Peace, TRNS, BBP, “Graduates”). 4. The tone starts playful and turns formal. 5. The claims are big and vague ("global peace movement," "bring your mission to life," "develop leadership skills"). 6. There are no member results or stories, and only one review. 7. "Graduates may pitch" and the $300 "sponsor recognition" tier may read as paying for exposure. 8. The page works as both an on-ramp and a gate, and it’s unclear whether that is intended. 9. The page never describes where the reader is today or what frustrates them. The page plenty to offer, but it never says who it is for or where it takes them. The 5keys: Where they are now: missing Where this takes them: weak. Where this gets them, with proof: missing. What it feels like inside: partial. What to do next: present I check out all your social media sites, now sure which one your using but people do look at these to see if your active? The about page is more than confusing. You have good key words I checked them in discovery. I build people's about pages not the same way as others do. We have a process and your involved from start to finish. If people have no clue about how to build an about page, your losing money well you try to fix it.

@Rena Nicole I did a soft audit on it and there were a lot more problem than what I listed. Anyway see how you do. By they way did you check your key words you were ranking for in discovery?

@Mikolaj Walczak See what you think "Master everyday French," "conversational French," and "speak real French" are three different promises, and none says how long it takes or what someone can do at the end. The author’s story says he started learning French at 40, and it never says what level he reached or how long it took. No result from any member appears in the text, and the header shows no rating. The text doesn’t say when the weekly live speaking practice happens or how many people are in it. True: Is good Outcome: Is good Over all . “Master everyday French in 10 minutes a day” is stated, and no one is shown getting there. What do you think?

@Mikolaj Walczak I remember you from last year I think when you posted something

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Haven’t roasted my own beans yet, but BBQ and coffee do have a lot in common. It all comes down to heat control and patience. Do you roast at home, or is it something you want to try?

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster I tried it once and the coffee taste a lot better but I do know people that do it all the time

@Paulo Costa, The Roaster Votei no ‘What???’ 😂 Entendo um pouco de português, porque os portugueses vinham comprar cabras do meu pai e ainda lhe davam vinho caseiro. Mesmo assim, usei uma ferramenta de IA para traduzir o post e ter certeza. Boa pergunta!”

@Nick Nebelsky Nice to see your the roaster of the week keep up the good work.

@Nick Nebelsky Well I remember the first time I won I had no clue how. So guess it happens to the people that help others? I saw in your community that you did a post and tag everyone in it how that work out?