I re-edited the introduction with all the feedback you all gave me last time. It definitely feels more aligned and easeful. There are some details to work on such as sound, maybe make the title shot longer with the title too. I'd love your feedback on this. I am now thinking about what would be the first scene after this intro, any thoughts? What questions arise within you when you see this intro? I'm having issues with Youtube because there is content of Charlie's childhood. None are nude, kind of weird. Hoping they review it again to make it available to watch for all of you before our next accountability call.

This has been a long project in the making that means a lot to me - one of the most important videos I have made. https://youtu.be/ZIFLrD2sYdU I know it’s not cinematically perfect and there’s many things I could change about this so I don’t really require feedback but me posting is more of a sharing to everyone of my creation!

Alexia: watch Grizzly man (analyse and get inspiration for my doc) + apply all the feedback from the intro scene for the doc (easing into the story, maybe seeing more footage of her, hearing Lucia's voice seeing her face as a young teenager, maybe add VO of how the grief felt for him and remove the rawness of the description of losing her with his mom…) + create another intro scene with feedback and share it.

First attempt at the intro scene for the doc. Setting the turning point that made it all change in Charlie's life. Music is just a test for now, it will probably change. But I would love to hear any ideas and feedback on music, sounds, types of editing that can increase the tension of the scene, maybe send links with references of other edits etc. I have many other shots also filmed that are in a similar vibe (mud, dark, weird moving hands on a tree, running in the forest, emerging from underneath a pile of dead leafs...). Let me know your thoughts!

This scene is probably going to change depending on the scenes before and after but I wanted to test what VO could flow with it, the type of music... It is one of the most beautiful lights I got to shoot, so I was excited to make a little edit out of it. I'm open to feedback of course. I just wanted to show the type of content I'm working on right now for this documentary. https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/t61vty6ppmnnvl7oz380i/Lucia-s-grave-Roots-of-play.m4v?rlkey=8i24dagx4bzkfeia1rznr46pr&st=qe54jfu1&dl=0