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Poker Spirit
I seen my emotions played on a card table A Casino Royale of deals that favor the house Underhand the innerstand to cut the deck Where the straight flush gives way to silence Some in the Red and the Black Where Diamonds fights with Spades and Clubs have no hearts You know.... not giving a chance to the charity of truth I move smoothly just to get the dealer in a Dark room with a Sam Cooke album Then make breakfast to see its payslip from hidden tips Making sure that the contract with my time is a return on Investment Here it comes like clockwork I call check All of them are in order I raise...... just to be awakened Then I see the true Spirit.... I call They look surprised I rake it in.... Now a bowl of Ice Cream..... With a Pen and Pad! ©️thelyricalexodus #tresduravia
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Do You Fit In? (Sample)
And back in the studio…. There are two versions of this track sample and I want honest ears on both before I move forward. Version 1 Version 2 And tell me why: which one feels more haunting, more cinematic, more emotionally exact, more replayable? I’m listening for: the vocal tone, pacing, atmosphere, tension, and which version actually leaves a mark after the 1:20 ends. Help me choose which version of “Do You Fit In?” deserves the next stage.
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The words are shards of info The current line tells me all i need to know Like I have permission to fit in... But I dont have the fit in .... Unless I earn the amulet....
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@Miss Lady
I Was a Sky
Soooooo your girl was been in the studio….😏 And as I finally finalize work on this long time coming LP, I need your help! ⏳ Anticipated release 2027 ⏳ There are two versions of this track sample and I want honest ears on both before I move forward. Version I Version II Vote below: 1 = Version I 2 = Version II And tell me why: which one feels more haunting, more cinematic, more emotionally exact, more replayable? I’m listening for: the vocal tone, pacing, atmosphere, tension, and which version actually leaves a mark after the 1:40 ends. Help me choose which version of “I Was a Sky” deserves the next stage. 🌌
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V1 was tight V2.........C4 to the door no BEEF NO MORE....
Acts 432HRTZ
This is the Book of Performance A grade that shows up when you don't A sentence that came with no corrections A line that never paused it came with expectations that were never met It gave my nervous system a jolt While I spent the galaxy waiting for a response Then it fell Into a abyss of lava that discernment didn't volley back a echo A familiar place of Chaos It wrote itself in and etched out templates that are hardened by missed opportunities So I stood there on a ship that left the shore when the berth lost the birth of something good aborted....... Dry and parched the hull of it scarred The ballast overturned in design It never had structural integrity So with a picket sign of its cool with shades on As the old man says ... Wait for the Sun on the Horizon Another ship comes in the distance.... Acts of Poems.... ©️thelyricalexodus #tresduravia
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Craven Smith
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Just a Poet with a Pen..learning to listen and write for excellence

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Joined Oct 11, 2025
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