@Paris Cluff I like Mariannes comments before with writing out the reviews over snapshots. Id also see if you can make your areas of expertise audience-focused. Meaning you say what you deliver to the audience. No need to do an overhaul but reword them to audience focus. For example, "money and marriage (relationships) could be turned into something like "how to not fight about money in your marriage".

@Paris Cluff I like Mariannes suggestions especially the removing 30% of the bullets. It does seem word heavy. Making a few of the important words bolded gives YOU control to where event planners eyes focus on the most.

Interesting thought! Id love to hear your thought on why an overhaul? (Like the one you posted)

I love the layout and smile. Simple and straightforward! Love the fees and I know im going to add that * to mine for travel fees. Such a great idea. Two adjustments id recommend. First is your title. It feels the bio has so much in it that it squished up against your name and profession. Because of that, it makes it hard to read. Other is a simple Grammar thing. With your 4 million + views, having it say "4M+ views" makes it flow visually better. Same meaning, switching the + and M. Overall awesome! Well done!

I like the colors as it fits with the order traditions of samurai. Love multiple pictures from different events. If I was an event planner looking at this, I want to know more about your creditability. I see a bio but Id love to see your stats! How many stages, how long been speaking, specific groups you spoken on/for, speaker prices (if you want that), clients youve helped, etc. Something to say that Bart is King in his industry. I see the 12k followers and your age range and am confused? Is that telling me that you have 12k followers who are between the ages of 30 to 50? Or separate stats all together? Last part is there might be a typo at the end of "Meet Bart". Its says "answe" In all, still a solid one page. Like Marianne said, these are the small nit pick things that you already are 95% there, but the few extra makes you stand out even more

And want to know something? Ive learned the to realize how crazy an idea is is to try out a gut decision. And I now love being crazy 🤪 😁 And on a serious note, appreciate you Marianne! You truly never know what you're able to do until you do it. My speaking skill has at least doubled, my ability to manage my time has increased, and my income and influence has improved. If any of you arent apart of mariannes podcast program, your missing out