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I can't open the old comment of I will be reviewing your copy, so post that crap here
⛰️Please leave a like as a payment⛰️ I know you guys will ask me, Where the fuck you went all this time, But the thing is I got bored and left copywriting for a while and just returned from my break, Like after finish reading 3 novels and reading some trading patterns and environment of the trade which which decides the trade. Let me caught up with progress with you guys 👹
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I can't open the old comment of I will be reviewing your copy, so post that crap here
0 likes • Jul 4
@Yassen Ex just so you know more than 2 images in a email is automatically go to spam ☺️. Too salsey this copy is like advertisement in TV You not even talk to the reader rather telling everything about your course like yelling in street 😤. No persuasive writing and conversation tone There is no first 3 lines WIIFM Overall 3 out of 10 rating.
0 likes • Jul 4
@Zaid Shaikh let's talk about SL The copy and SL not even connect not even a little completely opposite like fitness rather than your counciling or the mindset course which is what I came up with after reading the copy. Ohh......man!..... I laughed so hard after a while... thankyou for that. You know what these lines means Are you tired of feeling frustrated because you watch sexual content? Despite loading countless videos and following all the advice. You're still stuck in the same loop. (Been there) This is completely different from what you trying to say in your copy and the meaning made me laugh so hard also int he end (been there) is even funny 🤣. The flow of the copy is breaking a up because of grammar mistakes and confusing lines 😔. The SL I want you to make the SL first before writing the copy why because you get a idea of what to write inthe copy and connect with the SL so well. Your knowledge on topic is below the level of a 14 year old because I can understand by reading your so basic words u used there 😉 also why because I already went to a trouble of knowledge why my brain works for this s** and I watched so many TED and psychological videos which explained clearly who our brains spend more time on n this also why very interested. Anyways, The above information I provided is enough for you to improve your copy I guess. Keep it in mind having high information about the topic you going to write will make a master piece 🧩. Overall a 3 out of 10. See you around my friend 💕.
Completed the 4hr course! Now I'm here.
wish me luck:) i really want to make this work!
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New comment Jun 30
Completed the 4hr course! Now I'm here.
0 likes • Jun 30
@Zaid Shaikh go ahead I am in the mood I am actually reviewing right now
0 likes • Jun 30
@Zaid Shaikh i will literally forget so send this one to the copy review post of mine will ya
Day 38, can anyone review my sample
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yqCNh8QhfxYH-fdGdq-wysrosGx7NseVuauc-Nr7Oo4/edit?usp=drivesdk
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New comment Jun 24
Day 38, can anyone review my sample
Day 37, I wrote a CJN style email copy review it guys
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1wG4EguXVuMv2vHIleYhR6GKIWwBS-T228EDkOgkRMRQ/edit?usp=drivesdk Is been a while since I wrote a copy haha
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New comment Aug 9
Day 37, I wrote a CJN style email copy review it guys
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